I think I'm getting better at writing them. We'll have to see if the latest round get any response.
I'm trying to follow Editorial Anonymous's suggestion about what a query letter needs to include: What the book is about, What happens, and Why I'm qualified to write it.
Though for a 110-word rhymed Picture Book, #1 is awfully hard.
At least I'm back in the game. Baby #3 is now strong enough that I can type while he nurses, at least on the left side. (I'm not a great typist so I use my right hand more than my left... My right is responsible for 3/4 of the keyboard, My left has the remaining 1/4.)
But at least I use more than two fingers....